The sudden weird style change was so creepy! I love it! Didn't expect to have such an emotional reaction to this. Even with the quirky and quick approach to the story telling, I felt sad for the dog.
Great job on this!
The sudden weird style change was so creepy! I love it! Didn't expect to have such an emotional reaction to this. Even with the quirky and quick approach to the story telling, I felt sad for the dog.
Great job on this!
Thank you! I really appreciate that!
Haha I remember this from twitter! I think we follow each other actually. Small world.
very small indeed
Great job on this. I can tell this took some great effort to make.
The only thing I feel holds this animation back is audio. It could have used some nice 8bit sound effects with the action to amplify the battle. I also find the intro to be a bit dragging with all the menu stuff. It takes a while before the viewer gets it that "hey, this animation will have both faked gameplay AND cinematics baked into it". So perhaps cutting to the chase with that would have been in the animation's favor.
Apart from that I think this is really well done and I can imagine that compositing this must have taken a lot of time!
That's true. the file select screen is a bit unnecessary. It was kind of a last-minute thing I thought would help but it just kind of slows everything down.
Don't let the score put you down too much. I think you did a great job on the art. I just don't think this is for NG because traditionally the website is for cartoons type animation and not art tests and stuff. This feels like a vertical slice for an art portfolio rather than an animation itself.
I'm still not going to blam it tho because I think you did a fine job on the art - even if I don't find this suitable for NG.
Thanks for the review! Yeah, that makes sense. I'm still really new to the whole Newgrounds thing and still not fully sure if my work is adequate enough, I'm glad you still like the art.
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Original join date: 2004
Age 34
Animator & Game Dev
Joined on 4/16/21